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This is, hopefully, the cover of the printed version of The Phoenix Requiem volume 1.

Hence the big empty space at the top, which is where the words are to go :)

I have no idea how many hours it took. Lost count. Big thanks to all the people who gave me feedback!

Graphic Novel is here: [link]

Critiques


:iconchaoslavawolf:
This is my first attempt at a critique? D8 But..

This is an amazing work! The setting and postures of the characters fit together perfectly for a novel/book cover. :heart: the lighting is spectacular as well. The whole composition leads the eye around the painting from the girl's body to her face, then to the man which seems to be the 2nd focal point, to observe what she's looking at.
Her expression is very gripping as well.

If I do have crits though~ This composition seems to be of the more mysterious type, and makes the audience wonder who the man is, what are those spirits grabbing around him, what is the woman thinking, what relationship does she have with the man, etc. But it seems to me that for this kind of setting, the colors throughout the picture are too vibrant. The more intense colors might be used on the man and the woman's face, but then the building in the background and her fur jacket might be greyed down and shaded so that there is less contrast to catch the eye. Then there is a more mysterious and somewhat creepy outlook to match the "story" that onlookers think of.

I don't draw people well, so the colors and shading are my only critique. Other than those tiny things, this entire painting is incredibly well done!! :heart: Fantastic job!
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:iconguamish-girl:
I love her eyes so much! Very nice work, and the spirit hands are both creepy and beautiful.

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:iconohimseeinstars:
Oh wow, this is absolutely beautiful. I felt so chilly when I first looked at it.

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:iconthefoxdragon:
oh it beautiful! I love the ghostly hands!
It looks like a perfect front cover for the comic to me :heart:!

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:iconwildebeaste:
This is so beautiful!
I love the light.

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:icondark-magician-nikoru:
Oh wow, this is amazing~ I can't wait to get my hands on one of these when you start selling them!

I know it's a huge question that would burden you allot but, would you consider signing the volume to your customers? :3 I always love my books signed when I am familiar with the artist <3

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:iconxannaphia:
Damn, this is magnificent Oo

Must be my favorite illustration from you, I guess...
But it's a close one withe the younger Petria's painting xD

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:iconaleiki:
It's nice to see the final version of this! I love the shading on Jonas' coat... well, I love the shading on the entire piece. But Jonas' coat has nice folds :>

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:iconambrosine333:
Absolutely stunning, I don't know how else to put it. Your style becomes more beautiful with each picture. It's been amazing watching your technique grow since Inverloch

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:iconthejenjineer:
It looks beautiful! I just love the colors you used. :)

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